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[naturallypixie]

Naturally Balanced and Strong Wellness
Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching
Naturally Balanced and Strong Health Coaching

Naturally in Balance and Strong... Thoughts?

Comments

[missionista.livejournal.com]

I think all of these are trying to fit too much information into a small space. How aboutsomething like:

Balance & Strength Coaching
(centered & smaller underneath) Health & life coaching the natural way

[chapstickqueen.livejournal.com]

I read 'naturrally balanced and strong" followed by anything as to more like a nutriotionist or naturopath...which isn't quite what you're going for...correct?

[beah.livejournal.com]

These all make it sound like "Strong" is your name... What about "Natural Balance Health and Wellness Coaching"?

[naiad.livejournal.com]

I think these options don't convey what you're going for because the "and" breaks it into the wrong 2 parts:

Naturally Balanced
and
Strong Coaching

so it ends up sounding like strength coaching despite your intent (or like you are a strong coach). Also, when read as those two parts (which I do for all four of your options listed), they don't really parse: you're coaching naturally balanced and strong. . . what?

Wow, this sounds more negative than I meant. I'd better come up with a solution and not just problems! Um . . . um . . .

Personal Balance and Natural Wellness ?
Natural Wellness, Strength, and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Life Balance? (I'm not so crazy about this one)

Maybe leave the word coach out entirely.

And go you for embarking on your own venture like this!

[sihaya09.livejournal.com]

Anything with "Strong Wellness" sounds like bad grammar.

I would say "Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching" is best of those three, but it's still a bit wordy. How attached are you to "Strong"? 'Cause "Naturally Balanced Health Coaching" sounds good to me.

[burny-md.livejournal.com]

I'll go here too, just to make sure you're confused. ;)

I originally thought "Coaching Naturally", but now I think:

Balanced Naturally
or
Naturally Balanced (appears to be already taken by a chiropractor)

If you're going to stick with what you have (which I still think is way too long for a name), I'd make a couple minor recommendations. Use "&" instead of "and". Consider re-ordering them. It really does sound like "Strong" is an adjective to whatever you put on the end. So either make it "Strength", or "Naturally Strong & Balanced Coaching"

Before I forget...

[seerofkell.livejournal.com]

I agree with a lot of the comments already made. Strong, just doesn't seem to fit at the end like that and breaking it up with the "and" has the wrong feel. I'm not sure if this is what you are looking for here, is this supposed to be your tagline? Are you going to say, "Coach Brandie. Naturally in Balance...?"

How about something more simple, like "Natural Life Coach". Then underneath you can put, "strength and balance for healthy living". Natural life coach implies you are the best one for the job, naturally :) and that your methods are natural. ;)