I agree with a lot of the comments already made. Strong, just doesn't seem to fit at the end like that and breaking it up with the "and" has the wrong feel. I'm not sure if this is what you are looking for here, is this supposed to be your tagline? Are you going to say, "Coach Brandie. Naturally in Balance...?"
How about something more simple, like "Natural Life Coach". Then underneath you can put, "strength and balance for healthy living". Natural life coach implies you are the best one for the job, naturally :) and that your methods are natural. ;)
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Date: 10 Jun 2009 12:18 (UTC)How about something more simple, like "Natural Life Coach". Then underneath you can put, "strength and balance for healthy living". Natural life coach implies you are the best one for the job, naturally :) and that your methods are natural. ;)