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[naturallypixie]

Naturally Balanced and Strong Wellness
Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching
Naturally Balanced and Strong Health Coaching

Naturally in Balance and Strong... Thoughts?

Comments

Before I forget...

[seerofkell.livejournal.com]

I agree with a lot of the comments already made. Strong, just doesn't seem to fit at the end like that and breaking it up with the "and" has the wrong feel. I'm not sure if this is what you are looking for here, is this supposed to be your tagline? Are you going to say, "Coach Brandie. Naturally in Balance...?"

How about something more simple, like "Natural Life Coach". Then underneath you can put, "strength and balance for healthy living". Natural life coach implies you are the best one for the job, naturally :) and that your methods are natural. ;)

Re: Before I forget...

[youvebeenpixied.livejournal.com]

This is not the tagline. This is the name of the business. I really like Natural Life Coach. Thinking.....

Variations on a theme

[seerofkell.livejournal.com]

The Natural Life Coach
Natural Life Coaching

I think you need to keep it simple, you need a hook, then you can explain about the strength and balance, etc... Too many words is confusing to people.

Example: They advertised this diet in AZ called, Smart for Life. They recently change it to, "Natural Weight for Optimized Living".(I think there was a copyright issue or something) I hate that new name because it's not a name, it's more like a sentence and I keep waiting to hear the real name that I can remember and go find out more. I understand why it's long, I guess you can't say just Natural Weight or just Optimized Living, it's not descriptive enough, sort of like saying, "good food".

I don't know why I bring this up, maybe I'm just tired of hearing the commercial. ;)

Re: Variations on a theme

[youvebeenpixied.livejournal.com]

I totally get the too long thing. The company will be called NBS Whatever. The website will be www.nbswhatever.com. You will only see what NBS stands for on the site and in advertising. It will be written on two lines like this:

Naturally Balanced & Strong
Health Coaching

Or whatever it ends up being.
I would like to have several different variations of what NBS stands for scrolling at the top of the web page with the last one being No BS. There is a method to my thoughts!