I think these options don't convey what you're going for because the "and" breaks it into the wrong 2 parts:
Naturally Balanced and Strong Coaching
so it ends up sounding like strength coaching despite your intent (or like you are a strong coach). Also, when read as those two parts (which I do for all four of your options listed), they don't really parse: you're coaching naturally balanced and strong. . . what?
Wow, this sounds more negative than I meant. I'd better come up with a solution and not just problems! Um . . . um . . .
Personal Balance and Natural Wellness ? Natural Wellness, Strength, and Balance ? Natural Wellness and Balance ? Natural Wellness and Life Balance? (I'm not so crazy about this one)
Maybe leave the word coach out entirely.
And go you for embarking on your own venture like this!
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Date: 10 Jun 2009 01:37 (UTC)Naturally Balanced
and
Strong Coaching
so it ends up sounding like strength coaching despite your intent (or like you are a strong coach). Also, when read as those two parts (which I do for all four of your options listed), they don't really parse: you're coaching naturally balanced and strong. . . what?
Wow, this sounds more negative than I meant. I'd better come up with a solution and not just problems! Um . . . um . . .
Personal Balance and Natural Wellness ?
Natural Wellness, Strength, and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Balance ?
Natural Wellness and Life Balance? (I'm not so crazy about this one)
Maybe leave the word coach out entirely.
And go you for embarking on your own venture like this!